"I always double-check the address to ensure it’s correct before posting it. You know I have a habit of mixing numbers and street names around." -- I'm not sure if it was intended this way, but these two lines really anchor the sense of loneliness in this piece for me (and landed a little harder than i expected haha) beautiful piece, thank you for sharing!
I think it’s unfortunate no one has caught on to what you’re doing here. It’s fantastic, but it kind of belies a point I won’t point out in comments.
What’s hidden in this story is a deeply sad and lonely person, reaching out because they feel WE have abandoned them.
It is not beautiful. It’s tragic, and wonderful and human and you’ve done a very amazing job of writing without saying. I’m impressed by these two letter, and would really enjoy a private conversation if that were possible.
It’s a shame nobody read this story. It’s quietly genius.
Definitely reach out! I want to come back to this at some point, and my personal fiction writings follow a similar style, so it’s lovely to have such positive feedback!
I have no words to describe my feelings rn ❤️ it's beautiful ✨ keep going king ✨
Thank you, I really appreciate that 😁
this was so beautiful, you captured the feelings of loneliness and nostalgia perfectly. I can't wait to read more!
I’d like to come back to this at some point, so who knows! Thank you AGAIN for being so supportive 😭
Can't wait to read when you do! I've been meaning to read your backlist when I had time and it did not disappoint. Banger after banger <3
"I always double-check the address to ensure it’s correct before posting it. You know I have a habit of mixing numbers and street names around." -- I'm not sure if it was intended this way, but these two lines really anchor the sense of loneliness in this piece for me (and landed a little harder than i expected haha) beautiful piece, thank you for sharing!
Thank you!!! I was really happy with this piece!
you absolutely should be, i can’t wait to read more :)
I think it’s unfortunate no one has caught on to what you’re doing here. It’s fantastic, but it kind of belies a point I won’t point out in comments.
What’s hidden in this story is a deeply sad and lonely person, reaching out because they feel WE have abandoned them.
It is not beautiful. It’s tragic, and wonderful and human and you’ve done a very amazing job of writing without saying. I’m impressed by these two letter, and would really enjoy a private conversation if that were possible.
It’s a shame nobody read this story. It’s quietly genius.
Definitely reach out! I want to come back to this at some point, and my personal fiction writings follow a similar style, so it’s lovely to have such positive feedback!
Great stuff, really beautiful
This is beautiful.. 🥹😭
Thank you so much!!!!
wow, Aaron!! this is a beautiful piece. i have no words, oh my god this is incredible💋💋💫💫💫
Thank you so much! It’s very reassuring to know you liked this!
This is very emotional, the poem makes it even better.🥹
Thank you! I wasn’t too sure about its inclusion, so I am glad to hear its hit the way I hoped!
Great! I just subscribed!
Thanks, I’ll do the same back!
such a beautiful poem, you have real talent!
This letter carries such a beautiful melancholy. The way the land becomes a lens for memory is deeply moving. Thanks for sharing!!
This letter carries such a beautiful melancholy. The way the land becomes a lens for memory is deeply moving. Thanks for sharing!!
This letter carries such a beautiful melancholy. The way the land becomes a lens for memory is deeply moving. Thanks for sharing!!